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The human life

It isn't just a human life or is it?
What put us through all those complications?
We could have lived and take it very easy
But we are looking for immortally salvation.

We wear day in certain kind of clothes
and wear night in following description.
We're drinking wine, we're taking bath of roses,
and sleeping on a pills bought by prescriptions.

We're running towards golden gate of glory.
Success and wealth... but still no satisfaction.
Rewritten thousand times a simple story
of love and dedication... and distraction.

The human nature is no good as coach.
The human nature is thirsty, angry, greedy.
Reflection in the mirror is a dumb reproach -
The life in the life is nowhere leading.

We could have lived, but falling for temptations
we're loosing light in life and a chance for the salvation.

4.07.2012




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Publicerad 2012-07-04 22:39



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  S.A.I. Steve Lando VIP
Väl både livsbejakat såsom samhällskritiskt
2012-07-12

    ej medlem längre
Words of wisdom. The human way is the way of total dissatisfaction and irreverence to everything around us

I think it boils down to our knowledge of our mortality. It does funny things to our mind.

Well written!!!!
2012-07-05
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