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Before the war

there you were in the flesh, my love
Just to dress my naked thoughts.
moon was hiding behind the sunset
that evening.
The light silk smile of yours faded once tears were touching your lips.

During the war
There was nothing but pitch dark sky
only a few stars changed the tide. Blood was rinsed with wine.
Words inside echoed. Poems.
my only , of eventually you in my arms

After the war
once i stood, i felt the wind, the trees and the ground.
There you were, in the flesh, with piercing eyes, and that silk smile.
this very moment, to undress the thoughts with you.








Fri vers (Fri form) av Julio
Läst 225 gånger och applåderad av 24 personer
Publicerad 2018-05-05 18:54



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  Blått Norrsken VIP
Starkt och dramatiskt men ändå i en lätthet i ett accepterande . Snyggt!!!
2018-07-16

  the wildcat VIP
riktigt fint och spänningen i relationen som kännbar fog.
2018-05-17

  1BlackBird
Mycket fint skrivet!
2018-05-12

    Peter Söderqvist
Kriget ger en spännande bakgrund till en relation. Fint diktat.
2018-05-08

  aol
En poesi som borrar sej in mot hjärtedjupet,
2018-05-05

  Jenny Leine VIP
Poesi som går under huden. Mycket fint.
2018-05-05
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