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I and I (a dear re-do to the bob dylan song)

 

I notice I am getting less and less readers

     on the pieces I write about bob dylan

I listen to other stuff

     but no one has heard of it

And there is a reason dylan is dylan

      And zlatan was zlatan

    extraordinarie

    extraordinarie

    extraordinarie

    extraordinarie

And this is not turning out to be much of a re-do of I and I

I can’t do it

I slept zero hours, that means nothing at all

just gave ‘r’ the letter about… losing track… well the zyprexa shot

at 05.20 that and got my stesolid

wagering has been rampage

dylan infidels cd I and I well you see my picture in ray-bans that’s how he looks on it --- and that is the inspiration,,, simply put they are my infidels glasses

he is expressionless on the cd cover, I can do that too, at least could, could two weeks ago

ok let’s see if i can do a re-do of at least 2 lines

an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth

each man’s truth will be revealed

the stranger looked beautiful

one love said to the other love

not honor not forgive- in one’s creation

i walk in bare foot

and today had sandals

as i received the stesolid

a tiny break

it should take effect about now

if it takes effect

sometimes it doesn’t take effect

a righteous king that wrote songs by a creek-side

by his beautiful love beside

I and I

…one love said to the other love…

< ah i was gonna publish it at 05.59 but had published too many, needed to wait >




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