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Moonchild . . . There is a war going on



There is something missing
but I don\'t know why

There is something in the air
and it\'s all about a war

So I am standing at the bay
staring at the sea . . .

Senseless waiting for
the tidewater to come

The moon is up
in full bloom

- Can it fill my black hole

Why am I waiting for the tidewater
something is wrong, I don\'t know why

Then I suddenly knew . . .

There is a war going on
between magicians

and it\'s all about
an unborn child

The black and the white side
the evil and the good

The war has been going on
for so long time

Moonchild, the ultimate power
to heal our suffer

- Is the world going to end?
No one knows for sure

but the time is running
and we can\'t stop it

and it\'s all about  . . .

on which side we
belonging and becoming

Are we good or evil?
The answer is blowing in the wind

But still . . .
there is a war going on!




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Publicerad 2007-02-09 13:46



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  Marita Persson
En mäktig dikt! men är tidewater korrekt? om det nu måste vara det i en dikt, titta bara på shakespeare...
2007-02-10

    Charlotte S
Moonchild. Bra första rubrik. Jag gillar detta. Varm, den säger någonting. Aldrig sämre än tre, mest 4:or och femmor. Fint och enkelt. Begriplig och den tas om hand. Uppmanar till balans. Påverkar energin.
2007-02-09

  Lars Granlöf
Som jag tidigare sagt. Jag kommer att marchera bakom lammets fana...=)
De är magiskt, som din dikt.
2007-02-09
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