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a Bad Blues breaking


those steps will grind you down
those hips will move with ease
and part each chest
that plays a soul full tune

rip open those shuttered lips
these dirty shadowed streets
will twist you scared and homeless
and I will make you bleed

each pound of a bounty
made in flesh
freedom left departed
and with surrender
a willingless
shudders in the dark

from a purple heart
in just a mouthful
of solemn vows made obsolete
is when your clothes
gets ripped apart
and your soul craves

my body
and your desire
is a true work of art


your part has been played
as sins are made
in front of closed doors
and looked chests filled
with burning abandon
no less
will touch that face
of shadows and light

make you unzip
that loneliness
let you strip
in haste
and fear

for believing
in all the lies
I play
in your ears

and I do not shy
when your teeth
gets in the way

my desire
is a burning plane
of existence
that put all others
to shame


let me entertain
you

let us

play

a slow
but truthful

game


let me tell you
a maiden name
and I’ll give you
the reason

why all of this
once became




Fri vers (Fri form) av Tobias Hedlund
Läst 329 gånger och applåderad av 2 personer
Publicerad 2010-10-15 21:53



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  Fransisca Ferlin
Jag tycker om tempot och det välformulerade fysiskt råa i
den här texten, mina favoritrader är helt klart

hela andra versen samt

"and I do not shy
when your teeth
gets in the way"

Texten kommer väldigt nära, det blir
fysiskt och kraftfullt.
2010-10-18

  Shininkagemusha
"and I do not shy
when your teeth
gets in the way"

Skönt flyt där.
Annars känns texten närapå aggressiv i sitt driv. Om det är bra eller dåligt är jag inte man att bedöma, men så känns den.
2010-10-16
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Tobias Hedlund
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