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Titans

So you want words like booming thunder
crackling from my lips
and searing lightning on your skin
from sparkling fingertips

But I'm no wild storm
no lightning titan
not intense at all
I'm the summer breeze
the autumn soul
flowing over rise and fall
relentless
uncovering it all.

You'll get a silent wind
whispering words
too low to hear
screaming feelings
into your ear
emptying it's lungs
in a drawn out exhalation
it leaves you there
to disappear
to fear
too near




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Publicerad 2008-08-19 02:21



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  the apache kid VIP
Yes! Brings to my mind Blue Oyster Cults classic The Reaper...LMG
2008-09-05

  glasblåsarblå
titans. i love the title. i love the words, the story you are painting up. The expressions. The contrast in the wild storm and the summers breeze. The first stanza is just..woaw, amazing. You hit the right place with your words.

it is a strong poem. strong words and feelings, but still so mild and and gentle.

keep it up!
2008-08-22
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