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Fidelity

His sips of coke
Brand new shoes glancing-wild ponies prancing
As he hadded a smoke

I can't care less for the poor
He says self-esteemed-ought to be condemned
Sailin' the noon til' four

Praires sweeps away
The sun's warmth are a filling-in harmonical thrilling
And I get past another day

Love's truly affectionate, love's really fun
It's like tossin' and kept tossin'
Til' revealed, a spare dream
You hadn't dreamt from past
IT'S TRULY GREAT, IT'S REALLY VAST
No boundaries mentioned
Flawless ironi in it's sacred form
I revel the marvel




Fri vers (Fri form) av Jeanna Nilsson
Läst 309 gånger och applåderad av 4 personer
Publicerad 2009-12-08 14:39



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  Lady Alassa
marvellous
Now you are talking
the way you do it is the write way to do it.
you show all of us correctly
If you want to write anything do as you.
Limit your means of expression. You did and you can do it again.
Now you have started.
I appeal go on go on and you will be great

Good luck!!
2009-12-08

  Jeanna Nilsson
lägg märke till at jag inte skrev ordentligt innan jag raderade txtn!
2009-12-08

  Night Soul Woman
:) fri för tolkning:) Jiv mi da fun - Give me the fun:) - englesk tolkning då:)
2009-12-08

  lycksele
va?
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