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My Face A Bitter Reminder

Reasons to live
are just feelings

Feelings are combinations
of birdsong
and fresh air

Death is a beautiful thought
along a dark seashore

The cat's purring
starting up
mixes seamlessly
with a fighter plane
taking part in the Aurora 23 exercise

Dylan takes it all away
with Cold Irons Bound,
and it's the day of departure,
feeling like a deep arture;
the cat sensing life changing
for the worse,
my face a bitter reminder
of its absence

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Publicerad 2023-04-26 19:18

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So much meaning, so thought provoking. So much in just a few black squiggles on a white background. As a Vulcan mind melt. Your thoughts to mine. Brilliant! Must have reread it 17.5 times. Life, peace, Bergman, war, Christ, Death, Bob, Jas, Cheshire Cat, evolution – birdsong – mating, my consciousness stream refuses to finish – halting problem – images flashing by. All clad in naked prose that strikes to my core. This is why.
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