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The Montana Moon


Don't be scared
because you'll never again
meet someone

Your life opens like a spoon
toward the front door

That is your wealth

Your assignment is hollow
and opposite

The ring still soughs:

When I turn everything off
I hear a murmur

It's all the misunderstandings
that are jotted
in a careless and hasty hand
and have nowhere
except elsewhere,
in bodily feigns

The day calls for twelve hollow brutes
and twelve forgiven

Even the distant mountains
don't get rid of long distances;
they gather at high altitude balls,
dressed in blue;
the mists at their feet serving them well

All thoughts are intoxicated
in the meadows,
bluebells tingling,
lasting impressions auctioned off
for almost nothing
in rural towns

The Montana moon rises
in an American haiku;
the silent observer
of things to note





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Publicerad 2022-12-15 08:40



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Som svar på en kommentar på denna text på en internationell poesisajt har jag svarat sålunda:


Hello,

In a text like this you are bound to get lost right away, if you try to find your way through logic. The trick - or one of them - is to just let go, without expecting anything but:

1. Sounds. The sounds of the words.
2. Atmospheres. The atmospheres that rise in your mind when reading.
3. Feelings. The feelings you might receive from yourself when reading.
4. Recollections. Your own recollections that you serve up in the wake of this text.

The text is really simply a trigger. All texts are triggers, and the triggers are different for each person. When you write something, you write as many versions as there are readers, even though it may look like just one poem. Now, some poems - many - make out to have a purpose or a very much logical appearance - but they're triggers anyhow. So the more you try to make a decent interpretation of this text, you will just lose yourself in yourself - and that may be a good purpose anyway!
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