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Prosa av Lars Gullberg
Läst 296 gånger och applåderad av 3 personer
Publicerad 2014-03-07 21:39



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  lodjuret/seglare VIP
Jag trodde vi redan var det, sådana. Bara att våra horn sitter innanför pannbenen eller att vi bara döljer dem väl.
2014-03-27

  Connie
Det här är bara så bra!
2014-03-12

  Jaseph
En klurig kortdikt. Man kan tänka sig dikten både som beskrivande en lång tidsepok och ett enda ögonblick. Kanske skymtar djuret fram när vi minst anar det. Det behöver inte vara dåligt.
2014-03-11

  USSDF/HXS
Hey, Like this :)
-So many different paths,
off my mind, and my heart,
from your few words, a
starting point, where they
meet, where they combine,
in their own explosive
meaning(s), and/or trail of in
their own land of revealing.

Or, in other words:
Just like your work tons.
Thanks for blasting my
mind with endlessness
of inner wonder from
the starting point within
me, set off by you.

Or, in other words:
The trigger, you,
your composition,
the meaning of your work,
rocket me away, on my
endless interpretation,
inner questioning off, and
self revealing meeting of
one self (myself).


Love it for its shortness :)

Cause, I just read it again,
and a different path they
send my mind, trailing off,
at times my heart, flying away..

Some times,
wondering about
you and your wish
to enlighten or snare,
most times,
wondering about
me and the way
my mind tick n tack,
from your mindpushin
work, an appertiff deluxe.

So, Thx! tons n tons :)
2014-03-07

  USSDF/HXS
Hey, Like this :)
-So many different paths,
off my mind, and my heart,
from your few words, a
starting point, where they
meet, where they combine,
in their own explosive
meaning(s), and/or trail of in
their own land of revealing.

Or, in other words:
Just like your work tons.
Thanks for blasting my
mind with endlessness
of inner wonder from
the starting point within
me, set off by you.

Or, in other words:
The trigger, you,
your composition,
the meaning of your work,
rocket me away, on my
endless interpretation,
inner questioning off, and
self revealing meeting of
one self (myself).


Love it for its shortness :)

Cause, I just read it again,
and a different path they
send my mind, trailing off,
at times my heart, flying away..

Some times,
wondering about
you and your wish
to enlighten or snare,
most times,
wondering about
me and the way
my mind tick n tack,
from your mindpushin
work, an appertiff deluxe.

So, Thx! tons n tons :)
2014-03-07

    Lars Gullberg
Lars Gullberg
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