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planning undying(choka)

roses lilies bloom,

no regrets stop in garden-

no last time blooming,

not leaving without coming;

nature´s yearly come back,

great sceneries establish-

furnishing as per contract


Bunden vers (Annat versmått) av Tarantaran
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Publicerad 2012-07-24 13:18



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    ej medlem längre
Love the contrast of the flowing lyric with the last line which can have cold and detached connotations. Wonderful counterpoint, bringing to reality an excellent scene painted in verse. Thank you for sharing!
2013-01-22

  Alexander Gustafsson VIP
I’m done
ready for the Kingdome
laughing children
laughing
window
starlight children
where life will grow

2012-11-11

  cilax VIP
naturens osentimentalitet
2012-10-14

    ej medlem längre
Gillar mycket
2012-10-06

  Ninananonia VIP
Nature is a miracle...
2012-09-17

  Ewa-Britt Nilson VIP
YEEEEEESSSS!
Nature keeps going
keeps showing
for ever snowing
all the bloom
over and over again
with them you never
go in vain. Without
the life would be
pure pain!
2012-08-05
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