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My lord

If I had a sword,
I would protect you my lord,
with my sword.

If I had a hammer,
I would protect you my lord,
with my hammer.

If I had an axe,
I would protect you my lord,
with my axe.

If I had honour,
I would protect you my lord,
with my honour.

If I had a life,
I would protect you my lord,
with my life.

If I had a life of a warrior....

I have just one wish...
Give me a life,
a life of a warrior.




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Läst 325 gånger
Publicerad 2006-05-02 21:04



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  Lithia
Riktigt, riktigt bra! Härlig känsla du fått med här
2006-10-11

    Annan.Stans.
Förvånansvärt bra engelska...XD
2006-05-12

    Little Sunshine
Budskapet är bra. Men ibland måste man förstå när det blir för mycket upprepningar, skulle gärna velat se ngt varierande text imellan styckena. Känns lite enstaka liksom. Otherwise good, the english is good though :)
2006-05-09

  Julia B
fint skrivet, mkt fint.

"If I had honour,
I would protect you my lord,
with my honour."

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