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a partition in B-flat Major Pic: Allegory of the 1st partition of Poland


A Part of Things [rhyme]

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I feel like I'm a part of things
I feel best when I'm a part of things
but then with some little thing
I am apart of things

a child appreciates the smallest thing
to feel they are a part of things
for them some little thing
do not mean they are apart of things

for a wife she needs a wedding ring
to feel she is a part of things
then to slip it off in roleplaying
to feel she is apart of things

I feel like I'm a part of things
I feel best when I'm a part of things
but then with some little thing
I am apart of things

like this text would fit a song to sing
and everyone could sing along to be a part of things
but with the smallest error and typoing
it would be apart of things

but now I eyed it thoroughly again
so it is a part of things
so everyone it could understand
and as the summerclouds silverlining
I'll do a swedish version of it
so noone is apart of things

but like this text a part of things

2 Jun 2013

L Patrik W Johansson




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