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So this is how it feels..

So this is how it feels
to lose
I can't believe it
Though I try to get it right
I can't believe it

When my heart is choked from drowning in pain
When my breath is thin, yet still so heavy again
I wonder how my sorrow can still remain
When my brain is numb with feelings of shame

I have to get it right
But how can I fix it,
I can't eaven explain.
I have to save our lives
But this person beside me
has no choice to make,
only minutes to wait

I close my eyes for a minute
Searching in my head for something to say
Something good that solves this emotional mess
But I realize it echoes with emptyness

My heart is choked from drowning in pain
My breath is thin, yet so heavy again
I wonder how my sorrow can still remain
When my brain is numb with feelings of shame

I have to get it right
But how can I fix it,
I can't eaven explain.
I have to save our lives
But this person beside me
has no choice to make,
only minutes to wait

So this is how it feels
to fall
I can't believe it.


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Publicerad 2008-10-16 22:30



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  kaktus
Vad bra plutten! fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiint
2008-11-11

  Marreb
Riktigt bra!

Hittade några små stavfel.. finns kanske fler..
"But I realiza it echoes with emptyness"

det heter realize och emptiness
2008-10-18

  Tomas Alexander
fantastisk! har du skrivit den?
2008-10-17
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