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Tillägnas Karl XII Bilden: Karl XII:s Likfärd av Gustaf Cederström 1884




Dentalhall [Frozen Snow's Lake Now Warmed]

~¤~

Human beings and beings
all the footprints in the snow
all the weed at summer
in the woods and in the garden

for every new year the world
gets a higher antique value
as you as a child seen it
together with grandma
and grew old
within younger years

the fateful arctic ravine's branch
which is filled with the nutritious avalanche

of people and animals
in nature eternal

which conquers the enemy time
as enemies earlier in time

to flourish through the dirt, of water,
warmed by fire and overswept by
the four season's
and direction's
wind

with the same sunset over the frozen land
as in the beginning
ascend over the frost's once Edenlike garden

like a to-water thawed bucket of snow
within the well of Mimer's waterfilled lake warmed

frozen snow's lake now warmed

Human beings and beings
all the footprints in the snow
all the weed at summer
in the woods and in the garden

the fateful arctic ravine's branch
which is filled with the nutritious avalanche

of people and animals
in nature eternal


LPWJ english version 30/11/10


(svenskt original 28-29/10/10)

Dentosal [Frusen Snös Uppvärmda Sjö]





Fri vers (Fri form) av L Patrik W Johansson VIP
Läst 424 gånger och applåderad av 10 personer
Publicerad 2010-11-30 19:17



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  L Patrik W Johansson VIP
Ja från början var ju internet engelskt, jag tror de glömmer det ofta här på poeter.se...att skriva på engelska så det kan läsas av alla så gott som

Be well,
LPWJ
2010-12-01

    ej medlem längre
I save this!


/Ann
2010-12-01

    ej medlem längre
I really like this poem. Some Lyrics sounds much better in English.
It has a good message!

"Human beings and beings
all the footprints in the snow
all the weed at summer
in the woods and in the garden

the fateful arctic ravine's branch
which is filled with the nutritious avalanche

of people and animals
in nature eternal"


/Ann
2010-12-01

  Bibbi VIP
Så vacker.
2010-12-01

  Karl-Bo Lundstedt VIP
håller med Vargkvinnan..
Tycker nästan så..
Att den blev än vackrare
med "englarnas" *ler* språk....
U rules....

applåder i mängd..


kb
2010-11-30

  Eva Akinvall (emca~vargkvinnan)
verkligt vackert att få läsa, blev den inte t o m ännu finare på engelska upplever jag
2010-11-30
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