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Have I got for old for a dreamangel?

I lie over there in the bed and my mind flew away
A white feather fly away with my breath,
My mind fly to a other world/there the dreams exist,
The dreams about a other life/dreams about a family,
All the dreams has a value,
All the dreams are gone for ever.

Im stuck/in my small space,
I have try to fight against the wall/but im still standing here,
The wall is to hard/to high,
My tears flown down on the cheek/no one is drier it away,
I feel a big despair/I scream for help,
Sitting there in the dark all alone,
No one is drier my tears away/no hope..

My white feather how was flying one in the time/high up in the sky,
Rocking down to the land/soon it’s down,
But im standing here alive,
No one can help me/I have touch the ground
The ground who is so cold/ so raw,
My feet is frozen to fire/when im standing at the cold floor,
The floor which once was warm,
There we have fun you and me,
But now then i really need you.
You who hug me/you who drying the tears,
Where are you my littel dreamangel?

You which keep me alive/you keep the dreams alive,
When i really need you/where are you,
Have i get to old for a dreamangel?
Give me a last chance/give me a breath to breath,
I promise i will keep dreaming,
I promise if i will never se you again/i take a deep breath,
I see the people around me for the last time,
You know/i need you/i need my dreams..

Where are you my littel dreamangel?
I promise/i will dream like never for..




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Publicerad 2006-01-23 16:46



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    Poesiängeln
Otroligt bra text!!
2006-01-24

  Wretling
Åh va sött, din enegelska har verkligen utvecklas och du berättar vackert med språket den känsla du vill förmedla i texten.

Sen gillar jag slutet, för det påminner om dig ( och om oss kanske )
" I see the people around me for the last time,
You know/i need you/i need my dreams.. "
Sammanfattar så bra det du handlar om * snyft*

Jag är imponerad hur du har utvecklats med dina texter hjärtat
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